Autumn is…
Beautiful leaves as red as blood clutching onto the tree
Cute Tuis tweeting loudly in the tree like a piano being played be a pianist
Old, crunchy leaves getting broken down into little pieces in my hands
Leaves starting to twirl off the tree like graceful ballerinas
Smelling the beautiful, fresh, relaxing Autumn breeze
Colourful leaves old or soggy wet or strong
Flowers closing, winter is coming
Leaves as crunchy as crackers
Leaves as delicate as glass
Grass as wet as soggy damp chips
Trees as colourful as a rainbow
Red leaves, brown leaves slowly drifting down
By Tait
I really like my poem it's a good one.
ReplyDeleteWho else thinks mine is a good one?
Tait.it is a really good poem.I like your similes for example like a piano being played by a pianist,it sounds really good.Does anyone else like Tait's poem?
DeleteWELL DONE Tait I love Your poem Because You Put The Word Damp?
ReplyDeleteWOW Tait I liked how you used "leaves delicate as glass".
ReplyDeleteHi Grace.
ReplyDeleteyes I agree Tait's poem is a good one!
WOW Tait good job, on your Autumn poem it looks like you love Autumn!
ReplyDeleteTait It looks like Autumn is your Favourite Season. I like how you have displayed your poem. Keep the Hard Work up.
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