Monday 15 May 2017

Jordyns Autumn Poem

Autumn leaves
Red, yellow & orange Red like red wine
Yellow, brighter than the sun
Orange as a pumpkin
I love Autumn
I really do!
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By Jordyn

11 comments:

  1. Wow Jordyn. Your Autumn poem is VERY colourful and VERY bright!
    Do you think that Jordyn's poem is VERY colourful and VERY bright?

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    1. Yes Tait, I agree! I like how Jordyn used objects with colours for example: Yellow like the sun.

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  2. I really like your poem Jordyn very colourful. I like the simile 'as orange as a pumpkin'!��

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  3. Hi Jordyn, I like the way you used red wine in your poem. Do you like how Jordyn used red wine in her poem?

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  4. WOW! Jordyn! Your Poem Is Good

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  5. WOW! Jordyn Your poem stand's out peftly JORDYN
    WELL DONE! YOU Deserve it

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  6. Wow Jordyn great poem, I loved how you put "leaves red as wine" did you think that that was cleaver?

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  7. I liked how I said yellow brighter then the sun

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  8. WOW Jordyn I Like Your Poem Because You put brighter sun! Well Done!

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  9. Well done Jordyn! I like how you only you put in red like red wine.
    Who else likes it?

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  10. Well done Jordyn your poem looks amazing with the good effort you have done.Keep Up the Good Effort.

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